PROFESSIONAL & WRITING
Bring on the slop.
Not built yet
I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to reach out regarding. Please do not hesitate. Three paragraphs that could have been one line.
Unslop Your Email will say the thing, in your voice, at the length it actually deserves. It is not built yet.
Cut the throat-clearing
The opener that says nothing and the closer that says it again.
Keep the ask
Most over-written email buries what it wants. The point survives; the padding does not.